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    • Vengeful, Imperial Overlord of The Student Room
    • Location: UK
    old poem
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  2. mouldycheese007's Avatar
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    There are some parts of this poem which I think are terrible. However, there are some ideas - towers crumbling to thier knees, the idea of the empty space at the dinner table - which I think are really quite good. Keep writing!
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    • Vengeful, Imperial Overlord of The Student Room
    • Location: UK
    Ty, what were the terrible parts
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