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You certainly are on the right track...you may want to spend more time on it to organise ur arguments around suitable examples.....But overall this
looks fine... :smile:

The question is: 'which is the more important value: representation or consent?'

I've used examples to supplement my argument but they are not the direct focus on it - if that makes sense. Does anyone know what my tutor means - I personally wouldn't have thought the examples should be the focus of each point, rather evidence to support it but now I am confused. :confused: