My composition - Concerto in A minor... Need feedback :S
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My composition - Concerto in A minor... Need feedback :SHey guys,
So my teacher set me a task to compose a concerto in A minor and I've never really composed before but it's really enjoyable I found. Anyway I have finished composing the first movement to a concerto in A minor but I don't think it sounds quite right. If you don't listen to Baroque then don't judge it plz. Also I'm worried ...
Please give feedback so I can improve it..
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Re: My composition - Concerto in A minor... Need feedback :SNot bad overall. Including those Arabic-style bits made it quite interesting. The only thing I can say is that it was a bit cluttered. Perhaps take a bit of time to refine it and 'smooth it out' a little bit? It also didn't have very much of a 'direction' if you know what I mean.
But yes, not bad at all.
