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My composition - Concerto in A minor... Need feedback :S

Hey guys,

So my teacher set me a task to compose a concerto in A minor and I've never really composed before but it's really enjoyable I found. Anyway I have finished composing the first movement to a concerto in A minor but I don't think it sounds quite right. If you don't listen to Baroque then don't judge it plz. Also I'm worried ... :s-smilie:

Please give feedback so I can improve it..

http://soundcloud.com/selenagomezlolx/asd-36/s-gKu8r

Reply 1

Scoobiedoobiedo

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Reply 2

najinaji

Not bad overall. Including those Arabic-style bits made it quite interesting. The only thing I can say is that it was a bit cluttered. Perhaps take a bit of time to refine it and 'smooth it out' a little bit? It also didn't have very much of a 'direction' if you know what I mean.

But yes, not bad at all. :smile: