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Which introduction sounds better?

I have two introductions for an AS WJEC essay on Oleanna
'How effective is the ending of Mamet's play 'Oleanna'?'

Which sounds better?

The ending to Mamet’s play ‘Oleanna’ ties a brutal parallel to cases of sexual harassment on university campuses in the late ‘80s and early ‘90s. In the final scene, John and Carol represent the perceived ‘elite’ and a lower class respectively, emphasize the controversial distinctions between the two social cohorts, further exemplifying Oleanna as one of American’s most disputed plays of the last quarter century.

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The ending to Mamet’s play ‘Oleanna’ ties a brutal parallel to cases of sexual harassment on university campuses in the late ‘80s and early ‘90s. Representative of a perceived ‘elite’ and a lower class respectively, John and Carol shockingly develop in the last scene, showing how it’s no wonder it’s one of the most controversial American plays of the last quarter century.