This seems like a GCSE French Coursework piece ( I'm doing them now too...) I'd recommend not using "il y a aussi" twice because it'll restrict you possibly from getting the highest mark for sorta structures etc , but sorry my french is bad so I can't help with the grammar...
This seems like a GCSE French Coursework piece ( I'm doing them now too...) I'd recommend not using "il y a aussi" twice because it'll restrict you possibly from getting the highest mark for sorta structures etc , but sorry my french is bad so I can't help with the grammar...