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Edexcel GCSE History Paper 1 (1HI0 10-13) - 18th May 2023 [Exam Chat]

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Original post by evpoo102
the renaissance 16 marker on medicine was sooooooooo leng

loads of people in my school chose the industrial one but the renaissance one was toooo good i chose that
Original post by emilyworrell
i did mention that the hospitals were cleaner and looked more modern so maybe i’ll pick up a mark.

At least we both put Nightengale we’re in this together

Yeah fingers crossed we can get a few marks!
Reply 82
Original post by slklylmlalk
Btw did anyone notice the typo in the medicine 16 marker? It said that observationes medicae was 1576 but it's actually 1676.

no way i wrote down 1576 ffs
Original post by slklylmlalk
Yeah fingers crossed we can get a few marks!

hopefully… how did you find the rest of the paper?
Reply 84
Original post by emilyworrell
loads of people in my school chose the industrial one but the renaissance one was toooo good i chose that


i wrote like 6 paragraphs to avoid having to finish the evil 12 marker
Original post by evpoo102
i wrote like 6 paragraphs to avoid having to finish the evil 12 marker


defo smashed the 16 marker then well done
Original post by emilyworrell
hopefully… how did you find the rest of the paper?


Eh it was okay. I struggled to find a second point for the carrying injured soldiers question but it was all okay other than that 12 marker. I guess this is what I get when I manifest instead of revising 😂
Original post by slklylmlalk
Eh it was okay. I struggled to find a second point for the carrying injured soldiers question but it was all okay other than that 12 marker. I guess this is what I get when I manifest instead of revising 😂

ah alright, don’t worry you can pick up marks on the other papers it’ll be fine 🙏🙏
Reply 88
Original post by angelli
hey!! (this is my first time on this forum helloo ☺️)

does anyone know any possible questions for the history papers? i do crime and punishment (whitechapel), anglo-saxon + norman england and cold war, then weimar germany

im mainly interested in crime and punishment because i havent seen many other people here do it and was wondering if anyone had any ideas as to what topics we should mainly be focusing on? thanks so much!


Hello how are you? I’m assuming ur a girl? You know I really liked the socialism four marker at the start? I found the 16 marker (One on nature of crime) a bit wishy washy tho. Wbu?
Reply 89
Original post by slklylmlalk
Btw did anyone notice the typo in the medicine 16 marker? It said that observationes medicae was 1576 but it's actually 1676.


I saw that and thought it was so weird, so when referring to it I just put (76) in brackets. Kind of a big whoopsie, the bloke wasn’t even born till the 1620’s.
Reply 90
Original post by evpoo102
the renaissance 16 marker on medicine was sooooooooo leng

edexcel gave the wrong date for observations medicae but other than that sooo real i did vesalius and harvey for my other paragraphs and talked about how vesalius inspired them both
Reply 91
Original post by Maoamking1
GCSE history crime and punishment (paper 1)

anyone add their own points/thoughts on mine

Q1a) Two features of the growth of socialism
Spread by Immigrants e.g Russian Jews brought socialist ideas into Whitechapel after migrating from Russia to avoid persecution
Was feared? e.g the government was afraid that the growth of socialism could challenge capitalist ideologies

Q1b) Question was on how conditions in Whitechapel affected police.
source A was really nice, first hand H division officer account of struggles
sourceB was not so nice, illustration of some poor people

Q2) Follow up Q, i personally chose the poor lighting and asked if the lighting in whitechapel hindered the police. Used H-division first hand witness as a source

Q3) main difference between treatment of young criminals 1700-1900 vs 1900-present
crime and punishment first question wasn't too bad. I said 1700-1900 was more deterrence (Transportation) 1900-present more rehabilative (borstals)

Q4) Why were there changes in use of community law enforcement 1000-1700 (I think)
1. Population growth (e.g doubled 1485-1603, meant law enforcement needed to change)
2. Centralisation (e.g coroners, king wanted more power in more serious crime)
3. Change in nature of crime (more serious crimes due to reformation/religious turmoil, more serious crimes more likely to not be dealt with by the community)

Q5) option 1: To what extent did the nature of crime change 1000-1700
For: more crimes against authority due to religious turmoil/population instability (e.g heresy, witchcraft, treason)
For: New crimes introduced to secure William's power (e.g forest laws. William had to secure power as Normans were outnumbered)
Against: Continuity in crimes against a person (e.g Theft or murder, murder punished by wergild in 1000, murder punished by execution in 1700 shows it stayed the same over the period)

Q6) To what extent was Peel the most important reason for change in law enforcement 1700-1900? (not sure)
Didnt do this question so don't have any points.

let me know what you guys think!


For Robert Peel 16 marker i wrote about how he made the 1829 metropolitan police act and the 1823 Gaols act and reduced use of bloody code as he thought it was more important for criminals to reform and that and for disagree i wrote about Bow Street Runners how they introduced policing first and stuff like that
Original post by evpoo102
no way i wrote down 1576 ffs

Lol
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Original post by speedrunningGCSE
You are wrong. There was a quarantine during the bubonic plague not on an national level but in towns and small villages.


Yeah in 1348 they quarantined for 40 days and they also had lazar houses where people with leprosy would stay
Reply 94
THE CRIME AND PUNISHMENT QUESTIONS WERE EASYYYYYYY im so happy
Original post by da0sy
I put about the NHS, liberal reforms and access to cancer diagnosis/treatment via the NHS. Also, in source b , was the new treatment they were describing the Carrol dankin method?

It seemed like the method was the carrel dakin method however I though the carrel dakin method came about in 1917
Original post by Rushdis
What did people write for the 12 marker I hated it so much I completely waffled. I talked about the NHS as a 3rd point but for the rest I just talked about things ppl would get for free at GP/hospitals e.g ultrasounds


I linked technology to it - freeze drying penicillin so it could be distributed, then linked government - NHS, then linked individuals like Beveridge - most significant reason was individuals in my opinion
Reply 97
Hello there, for question 1a), I put that there was indeed a workers’ club and socialist organisation owned by Jews called Arbeiter Freint, located on Berner Street. The police were suspicious of activities in Berner Street, as the language spoken was mainly Yiddish, the native language of the immigrant Jews

For the four marker on non Whitechapel, did it ask to talk about a similarity or a difference? I’m really confused and I’m scared I lost marks 😢
Reply 98
Will everything be fine if I misspelt the Carrel-Dakin Method as Caryl-Dawkin method, I explained it correctly so I shouldnt worry too much right?
Original post by Edgebug
Will everything be fine if I misspelt the Carrel-Dakin Method as Caryl-Dawkin method, I explained it correctly so I shouldnt worry too much right?

No, spag marks on question 2 so you should be fine

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