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Many businesses today are very competitive, as businesses like Tescos promote their business world wide and increase the awareness. Using methods like internet popups, TV advertised have a great advantage for brand awareness. This also results to the business being well recognised, and well valued for what they display. Although they may have many competitors, this is why they intend on making their awareness effective, bold and more touching. in the order to highlight their loyalty to their committed consumers, as long as they have the support of their daily customers they will thrive to become the largest, most popular , well recognised business.