can you please rate my song
hey! please rate my song: im new to lyric writing and i wanted to make a creepy unsettling song so I made this song called old coffee:
where?
is it near?
(chorus)
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Let's see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
(end)
Sorry if I wasn't there
it haunts me in the back you laid there
medal room
womb tomb costume
(chorus)
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Let's see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
(end)
ich will dich
ill dig under your stitch
hurt? its an itch
The taste of pain leaves
its marks me
(chorus)
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Lets see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Lets see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
(end)
where?
is it near?
(chorus)
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Let's see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
(end)
Sorry if I wasn't there
it haunts me in the back you laid there
medal room
womb tomb costume
(chorus)
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Let's see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
(end)
ich will dich
ill dig under your stitch
hurt? its an itch
The taste of pain leaves
its marks me
(chorus)
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Lets see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
I want to see you tear
stare at the blood on my Hands
Lets see your greatest fear
stare at the ghost guarding the old coffee
where did you put the body
(end)
(edited 1 year ago)
I like the motif of Old Coffee, good job 
Would love to see an update if you record it with so music
Would love to see an update if you record it with so music
Original post by MosesSHTAR
I like the motif of Old Coffee, good job
Would love to see an update if you record it with so music
Would love to see an update if you record it with so music
OMG THANK YOU!!! im not good with making online music I can play thee piano do you know how to do it online? you know??
Original post by pupplehank
OMG THANK YOU!!! im not good with making online music I can play thee piano do you know how to do it online? you know??
No worries pupplehank
Garage band is a free music production software. It has a midi keyboard built in I seem to remember.
I have 3 brain cells so I didn’t understand a darn thing. Is this about getting an ex partner to see how broken you are on the inside?
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