I need song criticism

The Game Is Mine.
You poured gasoline down my face just to watch it burn..
No matter what i do i get caught in your stupid curse..
But this is the final straw
cause I've finally won it all
Because the game is mine
How will you survive the night?
My mind is a prison that will eat you alive
How will you survive the night(the night)
I can't leave you alone
Ill follow you wherever you go
Don't even try to hide
Cause tonight,( tonight , tonight)
The game is mine
Soon you'll feel the pain I felt
Ill have no sympathy at all
I stab you with my words
Cause that's what made me fall
Don't even try to apologize cause tonight,( tonight
Tonight)
The Game is mine
How will you survive the night
My mind is a prison that will eat you alive
This cell is especially made for you
And there's nothing you can do
How will you survive the night(The night, the night)
Cause the game is mide
......
I've finally taken control
I've almost won it all
Cause tonight(tonight, tonight)
The Game
Became
Mine

Reply 1

Saeed23

well,i'm sorry my feedback wouldn't be applicable to your song,as its not my sector. however,since no one has replied to your thread,why don't you ask chat.openai.com for it?
hope this helps!

Reply 2

V0ID

Original post by Saeed23

well,i'm sorry my feedback wouldn't be applicable to your song,as its not my sector. however,since no one has replied to your thread,why don't you ask chat.openai.com for it?
hope this helps!

Okay, I'll see if that works!!