When I write answers to 10 mark questions, I always just fire off 10 quick point and evidences, with some analysis, always starting off with 'When the writer says' or some 'The writer creates the impression'. My teacher says that this restricts my mark as I need flow in my answer. What are good ways to start off points, and keep the flow? Some friends have recommended phrases like 'not only this, but...' and 'The idea that X is Y is made evident by the use of ...' more plz!!!!!!!