Oxbridge personal statement

Hi,
I'm a year 13 student doing Law, Psychology and Sociology as well as an EPQ. I aspire to study Law at Oxford and I have about 2 weeks to send my application to my sixth form tutor and I really need some help with my PS.

I do have a few concerns regarding my theme, the overall flow, and whether my PS is "Oxbridge worthy"... so I would highly appreciate it if any ex/ current Oxbridge Law students would be willing to provide some mentorship on this matter. Any feedback on my PS would be valuable.

Reply 1

Genesiss

if you're asking for feedback on your personal statement, you can submit your ps to the tsr volunteer team, see link below. otherwise i wouldn't send your ps for review to random strangers on the internet. you don't know who these people are or what they will do with it. universities do plagiarism checks online yk? not safe

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/showthread.php?t=4237154

or do you just want to ask general questions?