Who can check my personal statement?

So I've done my personal statement. The only person I can really talk to about it is my tutor at College. I showed her it once and she gave me an opinion. I did as she said and sent her it. But she's not bothered to reply, and I can't see her for over a week now. (Trust me when I say she is the only person)

I really want to send it off next week at least! What on earth do I do? Is there somewhere I can show it to for an opinion? I'm guessing posting it online isn't a good idea?

Definitely don't post it online, for obvious reasons. I'd strongly advise you not to send it to anyone you don't know (i.e. anyone over the internet) because they too could plagiarise it. If she really is the only person that you think could read it, I don't really think you have many other options ): There are quite a lot of good videos around with helpful guidance like this one.

When she gave me her opinion the first time she told me to add and delete some parts but said I was nearly finished. I've done everything she's said, would it be safe to send it off anyway? Or no?

Definitely don't post it online, for obvious reasons. I'd strongly advise you not to send it to anyone you don't know (i.e. anyone over the internet) because they too could plagiarise it. If she really is the only person that you think could read it, I don't really think you have many other options ): There are quite a lot of good videos around with helpful guidance like this one.

When she gave me her opinion the first time she told me to add and delete some parts but said I was nearly finished. I've done everything she's said, would it be safe to send it off anyway? Or no?