I have a word doc of personal statement tips I picked up when I was applying (not necessarily Oxbridge specific but they do apply)
- The general advice is your personal statement should be around 80% academic (relating to the subject you're applying for)
- Personal statements are more important for some subjects than others - e.g. physics they're a very small part of the application, I'd imagine for english etc they're much more important!
- Listing things is 100% a bad idea! Instead when talking about things you've done you should explain how they're relevant and/or what skills you gain from it (this is a big thing, you should try and make everything as relevant as possible). Your experiences themselves are not important, what you took away from them is.
- Be concise, you're working with a limited number of characters/lines!
- Be honest
- Specifically don't lie about wider reading, it's the sort of thing they like to bring up at interviews!
- DON'T talk about how wonderful your grades are and how good you are in class - these are covered in the rest of the application/the reference
- Get another human to check your spelling and grammar, they can pick up things a computer's spell checker can't
- Avoid statements like "I'm looking forwards to having an experience to remember for the rest of my life" (you don't generally forget three years of your adult life) and "looking forwards to independence" (is rarely optional for people going to uni) and "my family...) (this is about you). They might be able to make suggestions as well...
- ... but don't let them rewrite it! This is your personal statement about you
- Don't repeat information - it suggests you're running out of thing to say and fills up valuable space
- Avoid cliches
- Avoid passive or neutral terms to describe yourself e.g. "I'm quite good". Be positive and show off that you
do have these skills.
- Research the course you're going to study so you know what you're going to do and why you want to do it (e.g what sort of modules you are taught)
- Talk about things you've done outside of your A levels/equivalent standard course requirements
- For most people, remember that this personal statement is aimed at five universities not just Oxbridge! Accidentally mentioning any one by name or location will get you a big negative mark from the others
- Avoid jokes, you don't know if the person reading it will share your sense of humour
- make connections between your interests and your chosen course
- draft and redraft and redraft until you're happy with it!
- UCAS have plagiarism detection software that all PSs are ran through, so obviously make it your own work.
When you're actually writing, a good way to start off is make a list of points to include so you've got something to work with! The structure we were given:
Paragraph 1 – Intro
Personal trigger for interest in subject (
not just “I’ve always been good at it/liked it”) – how your subject relates to society/current affairs if applicable and
relevant. Which aspects of the courses you’re looking forward to – prove you know what you’re getting into.
Paragraph 2
What you have done to develop interest – trips, books, wider reading (in & out of school). Link to subject – work experience,
relevant volunteering. Part time job –
relevant skills gained,
not just facts. Career aspirations - if you have one, put it in – it’s not set in stone because you wrote it in a personal statement.
Paragraph 3
Non-academic achievements, e.g Duke of Edinburgh - skills gained –
relevance! Doing a gap year? If so, why – benefits?
Paragraph 4 - Summary
Short – just a few lines.
Final impression. Recap – this should answer “why do you want to go to university and study your course” and “why do you deserve to be offered a place”.
Relevant to course – make reference to course choice/area,
not generic. Career aspirations are positive to mention at this point. Can keep it vague-ish for multiple courses, but course area should be clear.
... This is a lot more stuff than I realised I had so hopefully it helps!