Need help writing an email to sixth form!

So I enrolled at two sixth forms because I wasn't sure which one I wanted to attend, but now that I have chosen one, I need to send an email saying I would like to unenrol. Can someone help me write one please?

I was just thinking of writing something like what I've posted below but I feel like it's too short not worded well at all

Hello!

I just wanted to let you know that I wish to unenrol from [School Name] and will not be attending in September.

Thank you!

Kind regards,
[My name]


Thank you for the help!!

You may want to may it slightly more formal. This is what I'd write:

To whom it may concern,

I am emailing to inform you that I no longer require a space in the September 2021 cohort at [school name] and therefore wish to unenrol. Please inform me of any further steps I may need to complete in order to officially unenrol.

I apologise for any inconvenience this may cause.

Kind Regards,
[Your name]

This obviously isn't a perfect email so see what others say too and I also recommend typing whatever you plan to send into a word document and using the editor tool to help (you don't have to use all of its suggestions but it often picks up on stuff you don't!).

Good luck for September

Thank you so much! That is definitely better than mine xD

Do this asap - you are stopping someone else taking a place. Why did you enrol at two?

My first choice was the other sixth form but when I went to enrol they made me change my subject choices and I realised that it wasn't for me. Also due to my current health status, I'm not sure if I'm fit to travel to that school anymore. As a result, I also enrolled at another sixth form which is closer to where I live and overall easier for me to attend.

So I enrolled at two sixth forms because I wasn't sure which one I wanted to attend, but now that I have chosen one, I need to send an email saying I would like to unenrol. Can someone help me write one please?

I was just thinking of writing something like what I've posted below but I feel like it's too short not worded well at all

Hello!

I just wanted to let you know that I wish to unenrol from [School Name] and will not be attending in September.

Thank you!

Kind regards,
[My name]


Thank you for the help!!

Hi,

I see you have a great reply to your question from Gryffindor_02. I hope you managed to send your letter declining the place. I just wanted to add that many people apply to multiple colleges and well done getting two offers. The college doesn't need an explanation from you - all they are interested in is that you no longer want the place so don't worry about saying no to them. This happens all the time and you really don't have to explain anything further than - I no longer want the place. Best of luck.

Hi,

I see you have a great reply to your question from Gryffindor_02. I hope you managed to send your letter declining the place. I just wanted to add that many people apply to multiple colleges and well done getting two offers. The college doesn't need an explanation from you - all they are interested in is that you no longer want the place so don't worry about saying no to them. This happens all the time and you really don't have to explain anything further than - I no longer want the place. Best of luck.

Do this asap - you are stopping someone else taking a place. Why did you enrol at two?

You should always enrol to more than one just in case one of them doesn’t accept you.