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T-rex paper 1 question 2 English language

hi if someone can give me feedback on this . i need to improve in my analysis because i am kind off struggling
How does the writer use language here to describe the Tyrannosaurus Rex?

THE T- REXIS PORTEAYED AS AN INTIMIDATED FIGURE , God like persona TOWARDS HUMANKIND as it is being compared to a " A great evil god". being compared as a god already suggest haw his power is described as omnipotent comparing its strength to a supernatural power , indicating its power being in a larger scale , in a more biblical scale . this already creates this idea that the creature is superior over man as it contrast with" man like toys" the use of "toys" connotes this child like , innocent simple . this belittle man and indicated this huge ., difference in power between humanity and this creature . humans -showing that sense of weakness .Also "god" has connotation of eternity long life . so it being describe as a "god" could infer how this monster is unbeatable untouchable , that nothin can destroy him put him down. Because of this it makes more clear how its is described as a feared , powerful creature

T-rex is depicted as malicious , dangerous due to the use of the simile the "pebble skin like amour" the use of the simile " like amour" has connotation of war, military . this already implies how it is ready to attack and defend to further imply this world war between man and this reptile projecting the T-rex as the enemy , due to this it make it more clear how through the use of simile it emphasis how the humans felt under pressure and under attack

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yasmins06

That looks really good to me, at least 7 marks :smile:

better than mine, i waffle so much and waste time lol
I'm doing eng lang aswell and i know it's kinda hard to know how many marks to give yourself but i usually just compare model answers, even if its not the same question/paper.
AQA has some for every question, here's the one from Q2 : https://penketh.weebly.com/uploads/2/6/3/6/26362742/q_2_examples.pdf
It kinda gives you a good idea about the level to write at, but i think you're def level 4.