UCL English application short essay

Hi
Last year I applied to UCL for English, I unfortunately didn't receive an offer but I am reapplying this year. The university don't provide any feedback so although I have an idea of where I went wrong in some places just from my own judgement, I don't know if, for example, the short essay they ask you to write on the day was actually OK, and it was just the interview that let me down, or the short essay was also lacking, etc. I am wondering if anyone would be willing to share (doesn't have to be the whole essay) any part of the essay they wrote to receive an offer from UCL, just so I can get an idea of what kind of thing they're looking for. At the moment I'm sort of going off of the exemplars from previous ELATs from the Oxbridge application - is that a useful point of reference for the sort of style and level they are looking for in the short essay?
Thanks