Cambridge personal statement URGENT

Hi, is anyone okay to please read over my personal statement for cambridge geography and just tell me if it reads okay etc.? I was supposed to have an online meeting with my colleges early applicant mentor on Monday, but she didn't join the meeting and I haven't heard anything from her..... I'm really stressing because the deadline is Monday and I'm completely busy from tomorrow until then, and won't have a chance to talk over my PS with her now, so I'm just going to submit my application and hope for the best. Really if anyone can just have a look at my PS and tell me if it's okay for a Cambridge application I'd be so so grateful!

Reply 1

rycbar.123

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My mums read over it and says it sounds okay, but she's not been to uni so I'm taking that comment with a pinch of salt (no offence to her lol)

I mean you can use the TSR PS review service (https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/showthread.php?t=4237154) but the latest date to submit so that you were guaranteed to have had your personal statement reviewed before the early deadline was the 2nd of October.

Reply 3

rycbar.123

OP

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Original post by Talkative Toad

I mean you can use the TSR PS review service (https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/showthread.php?t=4237154) but the latest date to submit so that you were guaranteed to have had your personal statement reviewed before the early deadline was the 2nd of October.

omg no I didn't even realise that existed... I'm so annoyed I didn't expect the person who was supposed to be helping to literally ignore me and just not show up to the meeting we scheduled 3 weeks ago!!

Original post by rycbar.123

omg no I didn't even realise that existed... I'm so annoyed I didn't expect the person who was supposed to be helping to literally ignore me and just not show up to the meeting we scheduled 3 weeks ago!!

But I’m not a PS reviewer so I know nothing more than that.

Reply 5

Admit-One

Universities Forum Helper

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Personally, I would not share it with anyone online. You are just inviting potential plagiarism and you don't know how qualified they are to be giving advice.