Urgent Spanish coursework help

I've just finished (finally!) writing my spanish coursework for EDEXCEL and I was wondering if anyone would mind me PM'ing it to them to have a look at...I just want to make sure it all makes sense and is comprehensible. I've done it on whether Malinche initiated the constituional rape of the Aztec civilisation.

I'd really appreciate any help a.s.a.p because as many of you can probably imagine, the deadline was last week!!!

Thanks guys!