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Television: A Technology That Traps Teenagers!
Here is a sentence you will not hear often: ‘Teenagers who do not use television on a regular basis are 70% more to likely to have a good mental and physical wellbeing.’ These are the words of Dr Steven Wright, a Professor at Oxford University who studied the detrimental effects of the daily use of television on the impressionable minds of our youth, and his words have been seconded by thousands of teachers worldwide, who have witnessed firsthand the dire consequences of its use upon their students, and therefore we must not allow our teenagers to have a television in their room for their own personal use.
Does having a television in their room really pose a threat to teenagers? Well, television, like much technology we use today, is a modern-day invention that children decades ago did not have access to. In 1915, it was reported that 90% of all teenagers aged between 13-17 played a sport at least twice a week, however in 2015 a survey conducted by Cambridge University found that this statistic significantly dropped to only 35% and discovered that 87% of teenagers watch television on a daily basis. Television has begun to consume our teenagers' time, clawing at their minds and leaving them with little opportunity to focus on their physical health, hence why nearly two thirds of all teenagers within the UK are medically overweight. If we allow our youngsters to have a television in their rooms, then we are undoubtedly leaving them with little ability to develop healthy hobbies and chance to focus on what is truly important: their health. Do you think it's okay to allow television, an artificial parasite, to limit our children from growing into healthy, happy individuals?
Although perhaps the concern surrounding television on our children's health is not reason enough for you to forbid teenagers from having a television in their room, this is only one consequence of many catastrophes television causes. Social media. Photoshop. Films. Programmes. These are what 75% of teenagers in the UK have access to. They can be quite exciting; however, they are like Rolla coasters; there's are times of joy through their use, and also times of sadness and misery. Through films and new TV shows, televisions are increasingly displaying to our youth unrealistic beauty expectations or luxurious lifestyles and must have accessories that our teenagers just cannot live up to, and this has led to a rising number of children suffering from depression. If we normalize teenagers having televisions within their bedrooms, then we are exposing them to content that may put them at risk of suffering mental illnesses in silence, and an inability to protect them from the dangers they can view. Is temporary happiness worth an excoriating torture they may be subject to by the content shown on television?
We must protect our teenagers!
However, some may consider such points as an overly dramatic and unrealisitc depiction on televisions, and consider them as mere, harmless, modern sources of entertainment that pose no real threat to teenagers. This is because having a television in their room may allow them to privately enjoy some time of relaxation away from the stress of daily life. The average school day within England is 7 hours, and then on top of the tiresome stress of schoolwork, teenagers are piled with chores, homework, and many more tasks that leave them with little time to just enjoy some leisure time and the ability to watch whatever they please, therefore by allowing them to have a television within their room they can have the chance to do as teenagers deserve to: have some fun. Although, many strongly disagree with this as there are far safer and healthier hobbies that teenagers can take part in rather than placing them at the feet of the dangers of televisions. Sports? Healthy! Painting! Healthy! Baking! Healthy (and delicious)!
The list of other sources of entertainment are endless and this is why we must not let television be an easy fix to a problem with alternative, better solutions.
As parents, siblings, teachers...etc. all we want for our youth is for them to be happy and healthy, but unfortunately allowing them to have a television in there is just not in their best interests. This does not mean that they should be forbidden from watching television at all, but rather that they are using it in an area that we can observe, and ensure does not affect them physically, nor mentally.