WJEC English Paper 2 - Non-Fiction - Post-Exam discussion!

I set it our like a letter.
I wrote Dear Fred, and wrote yours faithfully at the end. I signed it and printed ny name underneath

I wrote love too on my letter, and before when we'd done it, my teacher thought my letter was fine, so dont worry!
For B2 i wrote that 'twilight' was taking over, even though I love the films! I thought it was something I could write about easily, I guess.

I set it our like a letter.
I wrote Dear Fred, and wrote yours faithfully at the end. I signed it and printed ny name underneath

Surely if you know the person you were writing to it should've been sincerely instead of faithfully?

Yes, I already pointed that out to him/her.

As you can see by the post times, by the time I started replying I was not aware you had pointed this out.

I pointed it out to him at 20:09 and you pointed it out to him at 20:33.

I wrote love too on my letter, and before when we'd done it, my teacher thought my letter was fine, so dont worry!
For B2 i wrote that 'twilight' was taking over, even though I love the films! I thought it was something I could write about easily, I guess.

Well if you said Dear Sir/Madam and ended it "Yours Faithfully", it may count against you did you just like write their address as well as yours or something? It shouldn't do, I wouldn't worry about it

Ooh, sounds good I covered a load of different topics in mine, hope I don't get marked down for it... I put -

- How Pixar has developed and grown up with our generation (because it's a teen magazine) from the days of Toy Story to much more believable, realistic animation with the likes of Wall-E.
- How teenagers no longer want fairytale endings and fantasy-style scripts, they want gritty realism such as "Kidulthood" that can appeal to them and show them that they're not alone.
- The development of 3D technology that really came to the public eye with the release of "Avatar", and how so many film companies and cinemas are now taking advantage of it and offering so many films in 3D.
- So many books are being adapted for screen following the huge success of the Harry Potter franchise, and it's getting to the point where people are either not knowing that the films they are watching have been adapted from books, or not bothering to read the book because they can just watch the film.
- Watching in HD also adds to the realism which means people can find it hard to separate fact from fiction.
- A closing paragraph about the dangers of not being able to separate what they see in films from their expectations of real life. I mentioned werewolves and vampires a little dig at Twi-hards.

i wrote "Yours Truly" LOL is that ok? *facepalm"

That's INSANE how did you think of that in an exam!
All I can say is impressive stuff (slow clap)
Mine was about films and was titled " hot or not"

That's INSANE how did you think of that in an exam!
All I can say is impressive stuff (slow clap)
Mine was about films and was titled " hot or not"