Had the 'eureka' moment with my dissertation last night. Unfortunately I handed a (shockingly bad) first draft in on Monday, but was told if I am not happy with it to resubmit on Friday, as my tutor will not be able to read it until Monday. I now have about a day and a half to rewrite 10,000 words.
Also, just a quick question - what's the general consensus on using 'I' in dissertations? I have avoided doing this so far but have just read a friend's dissertation and he got 85 on it. I also read his second year writing credit on which he also scored 85, and he has used 'I' throughout both. He did go to a different but still reputable university though. I would really rather use 'I' in my dissertation, mainly because I think it reads better than the frequent use of 'It is contended here...' with other synonyms for 'contended' etc. Any thoughts? Think I will do it and if my tutor dislikes it I can just change it?