no this is incorrect, to write a 12 marker you1. Give a summary of the key words in the question (for this question: describe cultural diversity like the bullet point says)2. ALWAYS START WITH AGREE! you give two examples of how the statement will be valid3. then make the counter argument, make sure that it is not the same as your for argument! always do 2 FOR AND 2 AGAINST4. conclude. this is THE ONLY time where you should say your opinion!