need feedback on personal statement but no one to go to

I need feedback on my personal statement but I have nobody I can ask. I tried getting feedback from my school but the feedback wasn't very helpful. They told me to remove any mention of mathematics and books I read and just to talk about all the subjects I did at a level and every skill I gained even from irrelevent extracirriculars. I go to a low performing state school

Reply 1

Muttley79

Original post by blueglases

DO NOT send it to anyone on here. You can submit it to TSR securely but it's too late to get it back for the equal consideration deadline.

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=1372

Reply 2

blueglases

Original post by Muttley79

DO NOT send it to anyone on here. You can submit it to TSR securely but it's too late to get it back for the equal consideration deadline.

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forumdisplay.php?f=1372

there's two 'start new discussion' buttons. I can click any of them and post it there, right? I do not want to risk posting it publicly

Reply 3

mesub

Original post by blueglases

there's two 'start new discussion' buttons. I can click any of them and post it there, right? I do not want to risk posting it publicly

Any should work.

Alternatively filling out this form (https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/forms.php?do=form&fid=25) will make sure it ends up in the right place.