Someone to look at my personal statement for Ancient and Modern history?

I haven't had much help with my personal statement since none of my teachers know anything about ancient history and I'm the only joint honours AND the only history oxbridge applicant in my school this year (out of 3 oxbridge applicants :frown:

). Basically it's quite a bit over the word limit and I have no idea if it's actually good. Would somebody be able to look at it for me and give some feedback?

Thanks!

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ageshallnot

Original post by haum3a

). Basically it's quite a bit over the word limit and I have no idea if it's actually good. Would somebody be able to look at it for me and give some feedback?

Thanks!

https://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/showthread.php?t=4237154

Don't give it to random strangers!