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introduction. start with three short, snappy sentences to grab their attention, waffle for a little bit, then end it with a rhetorical question to keep them hooked
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an anecdote. basically, this paragraph needs to be a short story that is either true or made up that can help convince your audience of your perspective. make it emotional
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statistics. don't mix too many numbers in there, english teachers don't tend to like that. but making up a couple can really help back up your point
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OPTIONAL, do a really short one summarising what the previous two paragraphs mean in relation to your question, and why they help your point
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undermine the opposing argument. state a different point of view, recognise others may believe it, and then argue as hard as you can that it is wrong, and give very good reasons
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conclusion. bring it all together, and re-state your opinion. also, refer back to something that happened in the anecdote. this is called a cyclical structure, and examiners love it
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went from 3s to 9s with (literally) night before revision - ask me anything59
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went from 3s to 9s with (literally) night before revision - ask me anything59