Pretty good although I would change the last panel "inside" to "within it".
Original post by DiddyDec
Pretty good although I would change the last panel "inside" to "within it".
Thank you very much!
You've been very kind.
I don't want to be too pushy. 
If you had an entire comic book to be translated or proofread, who could I ask?
If you had an entire comic book to be translated or proofread, who could I ask?
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