^^ also i didnt go heavily in detail bc it was like comparing them wasnt it? i literally wrote both poems show strong feelings, scaffolding through structure and whatever that second one was called through metaphors. then i lit gave 1 example but didnt explain it so again it should be fine bc I FINALLY UNDERSTOOD A POEM FOR ONCE BUT I DIDNT COMMENT ON IT WELL WHICH IS ANNOYING AND LOTS OF PPL LIKED IT SO GRADE BOUNDARIES PROBS UP SLIGHTLY. i dont think they'll skyrocket tho, but like tryna prepare myself😭