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Though many people claim sport is international it is actually not available in many places around the earth such as developing countries.
Many people play sport for fun too. The inventions of cheaper sports such as basketball and football have given the developing world a better taste of sport
maybe for this transistion, try developing the "developing world" section instead of going straight into "many people play sport for fun too" makes it a little less dijointed.
You could even condense it into one paragraph. Develop and expand the developing world point in the one paragraph, explain and analyse it.
King Pieb
maybe for this transistion, try developing the "developing world" section instead of going straight into "many people play sport for fun too" makes it a little less dijointed.
You could even condense it into one paragraph. Develop and expand the developing world point in the one paragraph, explain and analyse it.
You could even condense it into one paragraph. Develop and expand the developing world point in the one paragraph, explain and analyse it.
Ah, ok, thanks ^^
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