I need help writing my English personal statement!

hello,
although I have not decided to take English as a course at university, I could help with the statement using my own experience. When I wrote my personal statement, I made sure to conclude how may affirmation for my subject came about (if it was a particular event and why it impacted me). For the main embodiment of my personal statement, I wrote about my wider reading into the topic and how it led me into my choice of work experience. When it came to the work experience, writing about which skills you have acquired from the situation and how it correlates to the course worked really well for me. Using what I had learnt from the work, I referenced some more wider reading topics, before closing my personal statement. The closing paragraph for me was the point where I explained other extra-curricular activities,th skills I had developed, gave examples and general knowledge. Please do not forget to consistently include why you want to do this course throughout the statement.
I hope this helped.