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    Okay so I've wrote the story and thats fine but I'm really stuck with the commentary, our teacher really hasn't specified what were putting in this. I've wrote about things like how I changed it in drafts and a few things about similes etc but I was mostly wondering whether I'm supposed to go into detail about nouns etc, any example commentarys or the like would be greatly appreciated. Thanks. Oh and it's for Englsih Language.

    i'm actually in an english lesson right now writing a commentary, ahaha.
    basically your writing to impress the examiner and pursuade them to give you an a

    so write about any techinques you use, figurative language, metaphors etc
    also inspirations and why you chose this to write about.

    you just have to show how much your in control on your work..

    hope this helps!
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