Creative Writing Commentary. D:

Hello! Well, to put it simply I'm stuck.
I am doing AS level English Language, and I'm confused on how to write my commentary for my creative writing. I just... don't know how to start it. Or what to include. Me, being the stupid person that I am, have lost my sheet with the linguistic features which I have to highlight in my story and explain. Gaah.
D:
I'd be very greatful if you helped. :] In fact, I'd love you forever.
Also, Do you know where I could find an example of a commentary? (For a story?)

Thank you!

Reply 1

thatkidd

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You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.

Reply 2

Pr!Nc$s

thatkidd

You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.

Hey can u help me 2plz... bcoz im doin A.S english language n im stuck on my commentry.. i dnt hav a clue wat 2do...

Reply 3

letsdothetimewarpagain

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Pr!Nc$s

Hey can u help me 2plz... bcoz im doin A.S english language n im stuck on my commentry.. i dnt hav a clue wat 2do...

No text speak, please =)

What are you specifically stuck on? Might help people to help you if you can be as specific as possible..

Reply 4

Pr!Nc$s

letsdothetimewarpagain

No text speak, please =)

What are you specifically stuck on? Might help people to help you if you can be as specific as possible..

SORRY!! im just use 2 text speech.... what does no1 use text speech here?
well... i dont know how to put pen to paper, im not sure how to start my work and what to include and how to include it....
i did a story about an earthquake as if iv been there while there was an earthauqake...

Reply 5

Natalee.XX

PLEASEE help me i done a story based on my sisters keeper and im REALLY stuck on the commentry :/
anyone????

xxxx

Reply 6

dangermouse00

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Fallacy

Hello! Well, to put it simply I'm stuck.
I am doing AS level English Language, and I'm confused on how to write my commentary for my creative writing. I just... don't know how to start it. Or what to include. Me, being the stupid person that I am, have lost my sheet with the linguistic features which I have to highlight in my story and explain. Gaah.
D:
I'd be very greatful if you helped. :] In fact, I'd love you forever.
Also, Do you know where I could find an example of a commentary? (For a story?)

Thank you!

To put it simply, a commentary is a piece of work in which you need to discuss the decisions you made while writing your creative piece. For example what influenced you on the story or plot, in the characters too. Also you need to talk about linguistic devices (if you've used any, say why not if you haven't) and things like form, structure and language. Things like mood and tone are also important things to talk about, as well a potential reader's interpretation of what you've written. If you need any more info, quote me in your reply.

Reply 7

Datnebnnii

Original post by thatkidd

You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.

I would be incredibly interested in seeing that piece of work. I know is has been a while since this post was made. But still, if you happen to come back across this please contact me :smile:

Reply 8

Lexi2012

Original post by thatkidd

You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.

Hey major help needed on my commentary i am studying from home so i have found it have majourly! and help with the paticular things i need to include would be great :biggrin:

thankyou!! :smile:

Reply 9

anonymous19

I need help with my commentary too if anyone has an
example I could just use to get the gist of it please post it

Reply 10

kam_789

can you send me your commentary, so i have an idea as to what to do as i can't copy. I need this for my coursework (as language)

i'm really stuck!

Reply 11

lousieash3101

Does anyone one know where I can get a checklist of sorts for a commentary, think it would be really helpful for planning. Or has anyone got one I can please use? SO STUCK! :frown:

Thank you!

Reply 12

Imogen'sLaLaLand

Hi, I know it's been ages since this was posted and it's likely you don't have it anymore, but could you maybe give me some tips on how to write mine? I came into the course a few weeks late (I originally started lang/lit) and I'm trying to catch up with everyone else. Thanks

Original post by thatkidd

You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.

Reply 13

XXWilkozoidXX

Original post by kam_789

can you send me your commentary, so i have an idea as to what to do as i can't copy. I need this for my coursework (as language)

i'm really stuck!

na do it yourself

Reply 14

XXWilkozoidXX

you are so lazy bruh #banter

Reply 15

bigjohndog69

Original post by XXWilkozoidXX

na do it yourself

you bitches better come get some

Reply 16

XXWilkozoidXX

ok then pal if you want some i'll get jordan brell on yo ass

Reply 17

bigjohndog69

Original post by thatkidd

You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.

areet then dickhead, i got 88

Reply 18

Blue_Birdie

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Original post by thatkidd

You want to structure your commentary systematically, using the frameworks. You need to show how you've crafted the piece to accommodate for the GASP (Genre Audience Subject Purpose). I can send you my commentary, if you like. I achieved 87/90 in the coursework.