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1) Use a PEE format, where you give one short and punchy Point, then Evidence, use a short quote to back up your point, and then Explore, just analyse the quote and what it shows.
2) Word Level analysis is a must for an A Grade, so chose 1 word from your quote and write about what it shows in detail, give multiple interpretations if you can.
3) The icing on the cake would be sound level analysis. Are there any harsh plosive b and p sounds that reflect the violence in the novel ? Or soft and gentle sounds that show the gentle feelings one character has towards another? Or multiple 's' sounds (sibilance) could link to the snake in the garden of Eden, showing someone has an evil nature or wants to tempt someone else etc.
4) Talk about the techniques the author uses and say what effect they have on the reader (never really refer to yourself, i.e This makes ME feel sad, it is much better to say, This technique makes the reader feel (.....) for the character/about the setting etc.
5) In your introduction give an outline of the texts and briefly explain similarities and differences, never analyse words in the intro however.
6) In your conclusion summarise what you have said, I.e the relationship between Macbeth and ........ is .........., shown by the writers different techniques throughout the novel
7) In the part where you talk about the stereotypical society where men are superior to women, use the phrase a 'Patriarchal Society', this basically means men ruled, but examiners love that phrase haha
Hope this helps,
Sophie