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Hey, guys just wanted you guys to read on what I can improve on what you like about it and also what grade it is.*We were told to make a speech of whether you think humans should be united or not.*No matter their background, no matter their skin colour and no matter their race, we are all united. We endeavour into creating a slogan after slogan to try to convince that us humans aren’t united. We aren’t united due to background, due to skin colour and due to race. We can do a plethora of things to separate us, humans, into different categories, but what for? To show we are better than others. Just look back over centuries upon centuries, and you will find the evidence that this demon act has led to billions upon billions lying beneath the earth’s crust lifeless. Recently, George Floyd was killed due to his skin being black. All humans of the same kind this has led to a further 20 killed due to protesting of what is right?
Muslims, Christians and atheists. Different religions. But… Do they matter? Yes, we practise in all sorts of ways. Unity would be a miracle with this. Just due to race, everyone respects each other's religion. Ruthlessly and malevolently, Hitler killed a whopping six million jews. Should there be more of those Adolf Hitler humans types? Hindering unity. Causing genocide. Causing war. We are shading in unity instead of brightening it up.*Do you know what xenophobia is? If you know then without a doubt it's wrong. Country against country all fighting over childish things. What’s even more wrong is how a country ally with another country. 2009 in Los Angeles is a must example. A problem like an ant size to a problem bigger than the universe. How someone didn’t like sitting next to a human with a turban. This exploded to the entire earth. Causing death, riots and hostility. We are adults. We aren’t children. It's causing unity to get further away rather than nearer than us. We are all humans that must be united to accomplish an adamantine mission: unity from peace.**We all must conclude no matter your background, your skin colour and your skin we are all united. With no unitisation, imagine Earth... it will certainly without doubt… It's DEADLY! We must be one team with one goal: being united. We united. Will be a better place.*