Could someone please mark my English Language GCSE please

Hi there, I have completed this past paper as preparation for my resit English Language GCSE, and I would really appreciate it if someone could help.

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Thank you!

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Original post by paulinaurana

Overall, you made good points about the text and you drew upon symbolism often which was effective.

However, you need to expand on your points, they are often very brief and therefore lack detail. You need to show off your skills and your writing at the moment is simply not doing that.

The creative writing on the other hand was really good. The phrases, quality of description and just the overall flow was really quite good

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