GCSE AQA English. Please mark.
Can somebody please mark my english essay and give ma a grade and improvements? (I'll PM it to you)
It's on poems from different cultures, cluster 2.
Thanks
It's on poems from different cultures, cluster 2.
Thanks
(edited 12 years ago)
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I did AQA English Lang and AQA English Lit Spec A for my GCSEs and, not showing off obviously 
, got 2x A*s
If you want me to take a look, feel free to PM me.
, got 2x A*sIf you want me to take a look, feel free to PM me.
Original post by king101
I can give it my teacher via, VLE and ask him what he thinks of it...
Original post by mevidek
I would because I have nothing to do, but I can't because I am doing the Conflict cluster 
Original post by lace-rules
I did AQA English Lang and AQA English Lit Spec A for my GCSEs and, not showing off obviously , got 2x A*s
If you want me to take a look, feel free to PM me.
, got 2x A*sIf you want me to take a look, feel free to PM me.
OK guys I'm going to PM you in about 5 minutes (just need to finish typing it up)
I don't mind... I'm free now...
Me too!
I am doing cluster 2 too.
I am doing cluster 2 too.
Original post by MEPLUS-->YOU
Me too!
I am doing cluster 2 too.
I am doing cluster 2 too.
Erm... how do I write a PM?
(edited 12 years ago)
Original post by Ketchup'n'Mustard
Erm... how do I write a PM?
Click this:
http://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/private.php?do=newpm&
Original post by rae_
I wouldn't mind, I can also send it to my teacher who will advice you on improvements if they are needed...
OK I'm sending it to you now.
Original post by Ketchup'n'Mustard
OK I'm sending it to you now.
Thanks, I'll foward it to my teacher and see what she thinks.
Original post by rae_
Thanks, I'll foward it to my teacher and see what she thinks.
Do you know when I'll be able to get the feedback?
Original post by Ketchup'n'Mustard
Do you know when I'll be able to get the feedback?
Wednesday at the latest. From what I've read, it's a good essay however I have 2 issues with it
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The use of I at the beginning, I was told you should never do that as it is a bit cliche and seems informal in the examiner's eyes.
•
You could also do some more analysis and give some original ideas
•
Finally, evaluate the effect of the techniques employed. This will get you you A*
Hope this helps.
Best of luck
Rae_
Original post by rae_
Wednesday at the latest. From what I've read, it's a good essay however I have 2 issues with it
Hope this helps.
Best of luck
Rae_
•
The use of I at the beginning, I was told you should never do that as it is a bit cliche and seems informal in the examiner's eyes.
•
You could also do some more analysis and give some original ideas
•
Finally, evaluate the effect of the techniques employed. This will get you you A*
Hope this helps.
Best of luck
Rae_
What do you mean by evaluate?
Original post by Ketchup'n'Mustard
What do you mean by evaluate?
Evaluate the effect on the reader: Do you think it was effective in (for example) manipulating and the reader's response? etc
Original post by rae_
Evaluate the effect on the reader: Do you think it was effective in (for example) manipulating and the reader's response? etc
Oh Ok. Thanks
Original post by Ketchup'n'Mustard
Oh Ok. Thanks
You welcome
Feel free to PM me, I'll try and get back to you by tomorrow Good luck in your exam(s)
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