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How successfully has Priestley portrayed a class-ridden and hypocritical society?
Throughout Inspector calls, Priestley portrays a class ridden and hypocritical society very successfully. In Act 2, Mrs Birling says 'girls of that sort would never refuse money'; this shows she feels morally superior because she is upper class. In addition, the adjective 'that' shows her disgust towards the working class. Similarly, when Sheila complains how 'last summer ... [Gerald] never came near [her]', Mrs Birling replies that she will have to get used to it. Through this, Mrs Birling conveys her sexist attitude that men are superior and her lack of belief in women's right even though she is the chair of a women's charity. In fact, the woman's charity is only a veneer for status and respectability because Mrs Birling is able to use her influence as a wealthy, upper-class woman to refuse help for Eva even though the Brumley Women's Charity Organisation should help women in trouble. Moreover, upon the revelation of Eric's drinking problem, she says 'you don't get drunk' as an attempt to preserve her dignity even though Sheila says 'Of course he does, I told you'(Act 3). Through her actions, she is a hypocrite. The charity is a facade for her true nature telling the Inspector with dignity '[the charity] has done a great deal of useful work with dignity'.
Furthermore, Mr Birling views Eva to just be one of 'several hundred women'. By saying 'they keep changing' with the use of a third person pronoun, he shows that to him the workers have no identity as well as the fact Mr Birling does not really care for them. Therefore, by victimising a working-class woman in the play, Priestley may be trying to suggest how vulnerable the working class during the Edwardian Era were in addition to how it was shockingly socially acceptable. Through language and the actions of the Birling family, Priestley portrays the hypocrisy of the class-ridden Edwardian Era.
Though, as an employer, Mr Birling is responsible for his worker, as a parsimonious capitalist, he 'can't accept any responsibility' for her death even though it triggered the chain of events - the metaphor for how everybody in society is responsible for each other - that led to her death. He is self-deluded and blind to how terrible society really was as if he is 'looking through rose tinted glass'. Upon his knowing of Eric impregnating Eva, he becomes furious. However, this is not because he pities Eva but because he fears 'a public scandal' and the loss of his knighthood. All that matters to him is is the retention of a high status despite what it might do to others. Again, through Mr Birling not fulfiling the duties he should as an employer and accepting the responsibility he should as a 'public man', Priestley shows that many capitalists, individualists and employers in society were hypocrites.
Evenmore, by contrasting the different lives of Sheila and Eva, Priestley shows how class-ridden society is as well as how class and wealth causes it to act hypocritically. Though Sheila and Eva are both in their twenties and 'pretty', the cardinal reason behind their difference is class. As a working class, poor woman, Eva has to work in 'cheap labour' and go 'onto the streets' - a euphemism for prostitution. Mr Birling shows much disregard for the death of Eva as he impatiently states 'I don't understand why you should come here'. Nonetheless, when the Inspector informs Sheila of the details of Eva's death, Mr Birling interrupts the Inspector 'angrily' exclaiming 'why the devil do you want to go upsetting the child like that?'. The massive difference between his attitudes for the two situations shows how he feels that bad things could happen to other classes and people but should not happen to his child. Explicitly, Priestley shows the hypocrisy of Mr Birling and of society. In the Edwardian Era, two-thirds of the country's wealth belonged to less than one percent of society in addition to there being a clear divide between the rich and the poor. Wealthier families such as the Birlings lived in 'large, substantial homes' and had a maid - Eva is a reminder of the Birling's wealth - whilst people in poverty represented by Eva Smith lived in rooms out back. Priestley may be trying to convey how the upper classes and the wealthy were blind to how horrible the lives of the working class and poor are consequently trying to convey how hypocritical and class-ridden society really was.