Gcse english

I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.

I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.

so it’s only 8 marks. What I did was 3 points - 2 similarities and 1 difference and some brief analysis. This doesn’t need to be too detailed as the only thing assessed is AO2 (comparison of methods)

That’s really excellent 😱😱 I’d say they both use refrains (I love you) and one uses natural imagery whilst the other uses heat imagery with the warmth and fire (talk about metaphors in this comparison)

I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.

I actually did this question as a test. In ‘I am offering this poem’, the refrain of ‘I love you’ shows he feels so in love he struggles to express how he feels. The warm coat can be a metaphor for how you can feel surrounded by love.
In ‘The sun has burst the sky’ there’s a lot of natural metaphors and also personnification (sea laps the great rocks). these natural references also show how they believe love is a natural part of life. If you’d like anymore help, let me know. btw this is my own views, we haven’t had feedback yet.

Thanks so much! I will definitely follow that. I have written this paragraph, could you please give me feedback?

I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks

is this aqa eng lit?
thanks

Hi everyone,

I really need help with this unseen poetry question. The question is:

Thanks so much! I will definitely follow that. I have written this paragraph, could you please give me feedback?

I don’t know what else to talk about. Do you know any other differences or similarities? Thanks

Can someone do like two paragraphs for similarities and differences

For 2 similarities
1- both use repetition of "i love you" to emphasise that love is powerful. In i am offering this poem: I love you is repeated after harsh times (ie being lost in the wilderness) to show that love is more powerful then anything else that exist (you can mention other examples that are in the poem) In the sun has burst the sky: Love is presented as being powerful enough to create new opportunities (you can talk about how the writer keeps saying "beacuse i love you" to tell the reader that love is the foundation for everything)
2- Both use enjambment. ( haven't looked at this in detail but IAOTP= love is above all situations. Nothing can get in the way of it. TSHBTS= love is present in things like nature and is constantly surrounding us)

Hope this helps <3