The Student Room Group

2 am

Hi it’s 2 am all my friends are basically asleep and im actually gonna go sleep too ok bye
Thank you for letting us know
Incredible opening, really set the tone for the rest of this post. Following on from this, the exposition was a bit long, but given this is a new post its to be expected. The rising action really raised the stakes though, i was sick with worry about whether the main character would choose to sleep or not and how that decision would shape the conflict. Ultimately though, i must say the climax was incredibly satisfying, all the loose ends got tied up and the main character ultimately got their happy ending. All in all, i would give this post a sleepy/10.

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