Would someone be able to mark this OCR English Language and give me advice

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I know someone who was an examiner for that exam board and she said that it has a good range of AO2 and A01, could work on some more deep level analysis for anywhere higher than grade 5-6. She also said that you should develop your SPAG and your would typically be somewhere at a high-level 5 and lower level 6 at the top of her head but she said its really good and good luck!!!