Original post by zahraux05
Hi I have written my first personal statment draft for psychology and philosophy. Would anyone be kind enough to read it and give me suggestions to improve. You dont need to be an expert in the field, any simple advice should help. If your interested, please PM me 
There’s a PS review service right here on TSR.
Don’t share your PS with a random user. You don’t know if they’re qualified to give advice and worse case, it invites the possibility of it getting flagged for plagiarism by UCAS.
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