oxbridge PS urgent question

i was told to make my personal statement more personal and less theoretical so i trusted my teachers and did, however i found out recently that for oxbridge applications they need to be more conceptual and less about you. i have to rewrite it in the next five days to fit the oxbridge expectation, is it a good idea to completely flip my ps like this

i was told to make my personal statement more personal and less theoretical so i trusted my teachers and did, however i found out recently that for oxbridge applications they need to be more conceptual and less about you. i have to rewrite it in the next five days to fit the oxbridge expectation, is it a good idea to completely flip my ps like this

i was told to make my personal statement more personal and less theoretical so i trusted my teachers and did, however i found out recently that for oxbridge applications they need to be more conceptual and less about you. i have to rewrite it in the next five days to fit the oxbridge expectation, is it a good idea to completely flip my ps like this

I wouldn’t say there is such thing as an ideal Oxbridge personal statement.

I’ve talked to successful applicants for the same subjects and their personal statements have differed wildly - some being much more personal than others.

My personal statement (for chemistry at Oxford) from the last admissions cycle was not terribly conceptual and fairly personal, yet I still landed an offer. Really all you need to worry about at this point is ensuring your admissions tests (if any) go well and that your interview technique is as strong as possible- these will be the things that truly make your application competitive or not.