me and my teacher both feel that i have really good points in my mind, the only problem is, my phrasing is not the best. this is stopping me from entering the higher levels. any suggestions on how to improve it
hi, i dont know if this will help but if you try nominalisation. Just turn your adjectives into nouns and it will help you have a more academic feel to your writing. For e.g, Jane is presented as a vulnerable character vs Jane's vulnerability is highlighted......
Hope this helps in some sort of way and good luck!