English literature course work help!

I'm studying The Importance of Being Earnest for my course work, I've had my draft back and marked but I can't submit another draft, I really don't know what more I can do to get it into Band 6???? can anyone help??? Thank you

Reply 1

redandgreen123

Original post by hollie.w12

Sorry but for what controlled assesment is this e.g. story writing? :smile:

Reply 2

hollie.w12

Original post by skidders

Sorry but for what controlled assesment is this e.g. story writing? :smile:

dramatic genres - comedy :smile:

Reply 3

redandgreen123

Original post by hollie.w12

dramatic genres - comedy :smile:

You have to make sure that you vary your sentence structure and length, have perfect punctualtion and be more "adventurous" with it e.g. semi-colons. Engross the reader from the start, interesting vocabulary, can have some rhetorical questions, techniques e.g. alliteration, onomatopeia ect. Can include what people are thinking. Hope this helps and good luck. :smile: