what you must do in the 20 mark question to get a level 4 mark:
1. Use the provenance of the sources to explain similarities and differences.
2. You must cross reference, taking a sequential approach doesn't work i.e. source 1 says.....next paragraph: source 2 says......is not effective.
3. read each source critically and select the most relevant information to the question asked.
here's how I would setup a 20 mark answer: in this case the question is:
'How far do sources 2 and 3 challenge the view presented in source 1 about the contagious diseases acts?'
1. small introductory paragraph: here you should set out the positions of the sources and your overall argument, here's a model introduction paragraph:
'Source 1 argues that the contagious diseases acts were designed to harm women, to offend their feelings, ignore their rights. In addition, the source argues that the Acts were ineffective in preventing the spread of disease. In general, source 3 supports this argument, whereas source 2 contradicts it.'
2. in the second paragraph you could have a paragraph explaining that source 3 for example agrees with source 1. You can also integrate source 2 and say the small ways in which it might also agree with source 1 to some extent. Use quotations from the sources to support the points you make. Discuss the similarities between all three sources and analyse the reliability of the sources using provenance where possible.
3. In the third paragraph you can do the opposite and say how source 2 disagrees with source 1 , also compare it's differences to source 3. Always remain focused and relate back to the question being asked, reference the purpose and nature of the sources.
4. a conclusion paragraph: for example:
'In conclusion, source 3 agrees with the view presented in source 1 that the contagious diseases acts were harmful to women. Source 2, however, disagrees with source 1, as it claims the acts do not reflect any intention to harm women. Additionally, source 2 contradicts source 1 as it suggests that the acts are effective, whereas source 1 argues that they are not.
Now the 40 mark question B:
tips:
-24 marks are awarded for own knowledge while 16 for integration and use of the sources.
-to get full marks your own knowledge must be of great range and depth.
-you must use the sources to support your own knowledge - integration of the sources and own knowledge
example of integrating knowledge with a source:
source 6 argues that it will lead to the end of a husband's right to stop his wife spending money badly. Indeed, the Married women's property act did give women three important legal rights. They could inherit property, and money up to a value of £200, they could inherit rented property, and they could legally keep anything they earned during their marriage.
heres how I'd set it up:
1. if theres a key definition in the question, start with a small paragraph defining the key term in a detailed way.
2. in the second paragraph, you could introduce your overall answer to the question and use all three sources to draw links to the question.
3. this paragraph should contain detailed own knowledge and integration of the sources to support and link to this knowledge, you should argue one point of view.
4. in this paragraph, you should offer a counter argument to your previous paragraph, again integrating sources, presumably different sources would be used here to support your counter argument. This creates a balanced answer. You should integrate the sources and own knowledge together throughout the paragraph, instead of splitting it up into sources then own knowledge.
5. a conclusive paragraph, making an overall judgement and referring back to the question asked at the beginning and your introduction. It is important to use sources in your conclusion, for example 'In conclusion, source 6 is wrong to suggest......'
Hopefully this might be helpful to someone in some way!