I just received my provisional grade and I don't understand the world anymore. In my opinion, the content of the evaluation does not correspond to the grade. My average mark in the modules was around 70-80 points.
I had a very low Turnitin Score.
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INTRODUCTION
Quality of background scene-setting to case study/organization/problem/dissertation:
The opening chapter provides a substantial, interesting and very informative introduction to the general background business context as well as detailed coverage of the relevant technical concepts and terminology surrounding ***TOPIC***. A very good foundation for the dissertation.
Inclusion of a formal dissertation aim: Clearly articulated.
Inclusion of a formal set of dissertation objectives and research questions:
Both aspects are well documented and described.
LITERATURE REVIEW
Scope and quality of sources used: Copious excellent sources used.
Depth and quality of analysis and discussion: This was a very substantial second chapter that provided a deep-dive into current levels of penetration of ***TOPIC*** in the target organizations, along with a detailed discussion of related issues such
as staffing, technological and financial inputs to future expansion and take-up of
***TOPIC***. A detailed and fascinating read, supported by a very impressive suite
of tables, diagrams and graphs of various formats. Great research, well explained.
Quality of Harvard Referencing: A very impressive, substantial and well-presented set of final sources.
METHODOLOGY
Discussion of methodology and development processes:
There is some valuable initial discussion of the various research methods and philosophies available to a researcher, including the strengths, weaknesses and particular features of each.
The discussion then moves onto the practicalities of primary and secondary data collection. A very interesting chapter.
DISCUSSION
A good analysis of a range of enabling technologies including ***TOPIC1***,***TOPIC2***.
As with previous chapters, this is a strong blend of research, discussion and analysis, supplemented with
high-quality diagrams, charts and diagrams.
CONCLUSIONS & RECOMMENDATIONS
A solid final chapter that encompasses a good evaluation of the work undertaken, alongside many valid comments on
emerging problems and future work.
TOTAL GRADE: 55%
I have now approached my supervisor and am of course going through all the instances to challenge this. Nevertheless, I wanted to ask, what do you think? Or am I suffering from delusions and just imagining that I have been treated unfairly?