still stuck on my personal statement

Slim045

any advice??

Write words

yea been doing that, it's just doesn't seem good enough :frown:

Reply 3

Michael_Fishy

Original post by Slim045

yea been doing that, it's just doesn't seem good enough :frown:

I mean if you want help with your PS might be a good shout to tell us where you're applying, what you want to study etc. Cant help you if I don't know anything about you. It is "Personal" after all

Reply 4

alleycat393

Original post by Slim045

any advice??

Have a look through our resources below. Please do not send your PS to anyone you don't know or post it in the public forums.

Reply 5

Slim045

thanks, I'm gonna study radiography, coming from an access background, my choices are gonna be Canterbury Christ church university, university of Hertfordshire, Bangor, university of Suffolk and Keele.

Reply 6

Slim045

Hertfordshire is my first choice.

Reply 7

University of Hertfordshire

Official Rep

Original post by Slim045

Hertfordshire is my first choice.

Hi @Slim045

It's great that Herts is your first choice! Have you had a look at the personal statement advice on UCAS?

I've spoken to the admissions tutor for Radiography who stressed the importance of highlighting your interest in Radiography and your extra curricular activities that link with caring such as volunteer work etc. If you've had work experience in an x-ray department that should also be included or perhaps when you plan to undertake this.

Hope that helps.

Best of luck!

Thanks,
Heather

Reply 8

caffron

Try making a list of things you want to include, and then order them how you'd like to include them. It might end up differently but it's a good way to start.

Reply 9

futurechildnurse

Check out this link for help on how to write a personal statement: https://www.ucas.com/connect/blogs/how-write-personal-statement-0

Reply 10

anonxo

Same im stuck too ): like i know how to structure it but i just cant think of an interesting opening. Ugh

Reply 11

futurechildnurse

Original post by anonxo

Same im stuck too ): like i know how to structure it but i just cant think of an interesting opening. Ugh

What course are you applying for?

Reply 12

anonxo

Original post by futurechildnurse

What course are you applying for?

Law and Criminology. (:

Reply 13

jesswhitexox

Look at what subjects you are studying for A Level, and then write a little bit about how they relate to the course you want to do. Also write down a list of anything you have done in school/outside of school that links to the subject, e.g. any lectures you may have been to?