AQA English Language GCSE Paper 1 Question 4 Help

Hi there can anyone have a quick look at my question 4 and an estimated mark you would maybe give. Also some targets and improvements

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Aiming for grade 5

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Noor02

About 10-12 marks

You need more techniques and more detail. One technique per paragraph to show how the writer has presented struggle and how it makes the reader feel. (Empathetic, meloncholic, sympathetic)
Write a conclusion
It’s best to write both sides (agree and disagree)
As it gives the reader more of an Idea if how u have understood the text or not.

Also watch mr bruff it will help u alot

(edited 5 years ago)

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