AQA GCSE religious studies islam question

I am a private student so i don't have a teacher is this a good response

Explain two ways a belief in Risalah influences muslims today (4 marks)

one way a belief in risalah influences Muslims today is that because Allah has given Muslims a lot of guidance through prophets influences Muslims to feel loved by Allah another way a belief in Risalah influences Muslims today is that god has spoken to humans to tell them how they should behave this influences them to try to live as a good Muslim and go to paradise

would this get me 4 marks

Reply 1

annoymous_

I would say yes, but the first 2 marks could we worded differently to be a bit more clearer to guarantee the marks

Eg. The belief in Risalah influences Muslims as it shows them that Allah loves them. This is because Allah is communicating with them through the Prophets.

Reply 2

annoymous_

And then the second point could be worded like
Eg
Another reason is because the prophets were sent down as a guidance to Muslims. This influences Muslims to try and live a good life by using the prophets as role models.