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One thing I always struggle with, is putting my feelings into words and writing it down.
Someone who's a brainac in english literature, could you please give me a sentence or two on about:
if you ached for somone, loved them too much that it hurts, care about them, got so much passion for them.

Could you please put the above in a better more creative way, thanks TSR. :tsr:

Love BlueAngel xxx
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(Original post by BlueAngel)
One thing I always struggle with, is putting my feelings into words and writing it down.
Someone who's a brainac in english literature, could you please give me a sentence or two on about:
if you ached for somone, loved them too much that it hurts, care about them, got so much passion for them.

Could you please put the above in a better more creative way, thanks TSR. :tsr:

Love BlueAngel xxx
*Please* don't tell me you're sending this to that Shane guy? :p:
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*Please* don't tell me you're sending this to that Shane guy? :p:
no :rolleyes:
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no :rolleyes:
Do you condone plagiarism?
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oh come on TSR, u lot are well good at this. Ive seen alot of creative people on here.
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no :rolleyes:
oh thank god!
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i would. but i'm embarassed. it would probably be ***** anyway
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Do you condone plagiarism?
No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.
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No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.
No, but I was going to copy something out a book...
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No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.
Still, shouldn't these things come from one's own heart, not someone else's? However poorly expressed?
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No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.
just tell s/he you love them
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i would. but i'm embarassed. it would probably be ***** anyway
oh go on, try hun, pm me if you want. I wont laugh.
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A couple of years ago I could have done it easily... I was a creative writing protege. But not now. No no no. I've lost my creative edge and become unhealthily cynical, so writing about love is probably out.
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(Original post by Eeyore)
Still, shouldn't these things come from one's own heart, not someone else's? However poorly expressed?
those things I said in the first post are from my heart, but theyre not very good. I cant express my feelings very well, all I know, is that its painful and it hurts.
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A couple of years ago I could have done it easily... I was a creative writing protege. But not now. No no no. I've lost my creative edge and become unhealthily cynical, so writing about love is probably out.
i would never have noticed from your earlier posts... :rolleyes: love aint all that bad
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(Original post by BlueAngel)
One thing I always struggle with, is putting my feelings into words and writing it down.
Someone who's a brainac in english literature, could you please give me a sentence or two on about:
if you ached for somone, loved them too much that it hurts, care about them, got so much passion for them.

Could you please put the above in a better more creative way, thanks TSR. :tsr:

Love BlueAngel xxx
My Darling Shane
I know I'm a pain

But I cannot bear the shame
of you not even knowing my name

I love you so much darling Shane,
You make me go so insane

But I cannot refrain
From making you mine

Oh Shane Shane Shane
I see you through the window pane pane pane
Can you see my pain pain pain
Say my name name name

I know this poem is ever so lame
But thats because no one is as you the same
You have the money yuo have the fame
And I wish to my house you came

Oh sweetie Shane
Je t'aime, je t'aime! :love:
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This is a combined effort. Rushda and I just wrote it. Whaddya think? We are actually crafting some more fine verses right now so you may get an update.
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Dear Shane (I presume)

Writing a letter to you is hard. I love you, I always have always will. There is an aching from the very centre of my soul that stays with me, I cannot describe my love to you, it is every second of every day, every waking moment I think of you and in my sleep I dream of you. I love you. Whatever happens, I will always care for you, keep your name in a box in my heart, a passion, my song to you. I love you


Sorry quite long, and prbosn corny but there...
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My Darling Shane
I know I'm a pain

But I cannot bear the shame
of you not even knowing my name

I love you so much darling Shane,
You make me go so insane

But I cannot refrain
From making you mine

I know this poem is ever so lame
But thats because no one is as you the same
You have the money yuo have the fame
And I wish to my house you came

Oh sweetie Shane
Je t'aime, je t'aime! :love:
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This is a combined effort. Rushda and I just wrote it. Whaddya think? We are actually crafting some more fine verses right now so you may get an update.
Thanks!!!! I think, the only exception is the money and fame line, I dont give a **** about his money, I'm sorta rich myself, I dont care about his money or fame. I wish he wasnt famous. But the rest, Bravi Bravo!!!
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(Original post by englishstudent)
My Darling Shane
I know I'm a pain

But I cannot bear the shame
of you not even knowing my name

I love you so much darling Shane,
You make me go so insane

But I cannot refrain
From making you mine

Oh Shane Shane Shane
I see you through the window pane pane pane
Can you see my pain pain pain
Say my name name name

I know this poem is ever so lame
But thats because no one is as you the same
You have the money yuo have the fame
And I wish to my house you came

Oh sweetie Shane
Je t'aime, je t'aime! :love:
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This is a combined effort. Rushda and I just wrote it. Whaddya think? We are actually crafting some more fine verses right now so you may get an update.
I thought u were taking teh micky
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I thought u were taking teh micky
Do you think we poets would *******ise our craft in such a low manner? :eek: :eek: :eek:
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