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To, Creative writing geniuses/ romantic fools - HELP needed

One thing I always struggle with, is putting my feelings into words and writing it down.
Someone who's a brainac in english literature, could you please give me a sentence or two on about:
if you ached for somone, loved them too much that it hurts, care about them, got so much passion for them.

Could you please put the above in a better more creative way, thanks TSR. :tsr:

Love BlueAngel xxx

Reply 1

Agrippina

15

BlueAngel

One thing I always struggle with, is putting my feelings into words and writing it down.
Someone who's a brainac in english literature, could you please give me a sentence or two on about:
if you ached for somone, loved them too much that it hurts, care about them, got so much passion for them.

Could you please put the above in a better more creative way, thanks TSR. :tsr:

Love BlueAngel xxx

*Please* don't tell me you're sending this to that Shane guy? :p:

Reply 2

AngelofnoColour

OP

14

Eeyore

*Please* don't tell me you're sending this to that Shane guy? :p:

no

Reply 3

Zapsta

BlueAngel

no

Do you condone plagiarism?

Reply 4

AngelofnoColour

OP

14

oh come on TSR, u lot are well good at this. Ive seen alot of creative people on here.

Reply 5

pink_lucie

14

BlueAngel

no

oh thank god! :smile:

Reply 6

Just_Izzy

i would. but i'm embarassed. it would probably be ***** anyway

Reply 7

AngelofnoColour

OP

14

Zapsta

Do you condone plagiarism?

No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.

Reply 8

Zapsta

BlueAngel

No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.

No, but I was going to copy something out a book...

Reply 9

Agrippina

15

BlueAngel

No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.

Still, shouldn't these things come from one's own heart, not someone else's? However poorly expressed?

Reply 10

Just_Izzy

BlueAngel

No, its not plagiarism if the person is letting you use their words.

just tell s/he you love them

Reply 11

AngelofnoColour

OP

14

izzy_hattie

i would. but i'm embarassed. it would probably be ***** anyway

oh go on, try hun, pm me if you want. I wont laugh.

Reply 12

Toy Soldier

3

A couple of years ago I could have done it easily... I was a creative writing protege. But not now. No no no. I've lost my creative edge and become unhealthily cynical, so writing about love is probably out.

Reply 13

AngelofnoColour

OP

14

Eeyore

Still, shouldn't these things come from one's own heart, not someone else's? However poorly expressed?

those things I said in the first post are from my heart, but theyre not very good. I cant express my feelings very well, all I know, is that its painful and it hurts.

Reply 14

Just_Izzy

Toy Soldier

A couple of years ago I could have done it easily... I was a creative writing protege. But not now. No no no. I've lost my creative edge and become unhealthily cynical, so writing about love is probably out.

i would never have noticed from your earlier posts... :rolleyes:

love aint all that bad

Reply 15

Tyler Durden

17

BlueAngel

One thing I always struggle with, is putting my feelings into words and writing it down.
Someone who's a brainac in english literature, could you please give me a sentence or two on about:
if you ached for somone, loved them too much that it hurts, care about them, got so much passion for them.

Could you please put the above in a better more creative way, thanks TSR. :tsr:

Love BlueAngel xxx

My Darling Shane
I know I'm a pain

But I cannot bear the shame
of you not even knowing my name

I love you so much darling Shane,
You make me go so insane

But I cannot refrain
From making you mine

Oh Shane Shane Shane
I see you through the window pane pane pane
Can you see my pain pain pain
Say my name name name

I know this poem is ever so lame
But thats because no one is as you the same
You have the money yuo have the fame
And I wish to my house you came

Oh sweetie Shane
Je t'aime, je t'aime! :love:

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This is a combined effort. Rushda and I just wrote it. Whaddya think? We are actually crafting some more fine verses right now so you may get an update. :smile:

Reply 16

riotgrrrl

3

Dear Shane (I presume)

Writing a letter to you is hard. I love you, I always have always will. There is an aching from the very centre of my soul that stays with me, I cannot describe my love to you, it is every second of every day, every waking moment I think of you and in my sleep I dream of you. I love you. Whatever happens, I will always care for you, keep your name in a box in my heart, a passion, my song to you. I love you

Sorry quite long, and prbosn corny but there...

Reply 17

AngelofnoColour

OP

14

englishstudent

My Darling Shane
I know I'm a pain

But I cannot bear the shame
of you not even knowing my name

I love you so much darling Shane,
You make me go so insane

But I cannot refrain
From making you mine

I know this poem is ever so lame
But thats because no one is as you the same
You have the money yuo have the fame
And I wish to my house you came

Oh sweetie Shane
Je t'aime, je t'aime! :love:

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This is a combined effort. Rushda and I just wrote it. Whaddya think? We are actually crafting some more fine verses right now so you may get an update. :smile:

Thanks!!!! I think, the only exception is the money and fame line, I dont give a **** about his money, I'm sorta rich myself, I dont care about his money or fame. I wish he wasnt famous. But the rest, Bravi Bravo!!!

Reply 18

riotgrrrl

3

englishstudent

My Darling Shane
I know I'm a pain

But I cannot bear the shame
of you not even knowing my name

I love you so much darling Shane,
You make me go so insane

But I cannot refrain
From making you mine

Oh Shane Shane Shane
I see you through the window pane pane pane
Can you see my pain pain pain
Say my name name name

I know this poem is ever so lame
But thats because no one is as you the same
You have the money yuo have the fame
And I wish to my house you came

Oh sweetie Shane
Je t'aime, je t'aime! :love:

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This is a combined effort. Rushda and I just wrote it. Whaddya think? We are actually crafting some more fine verses right now so you may get an update. :smile:

I thought u were taking teh micky :s-smilie: