Art Extended Essay Title!

Hello, I'm new here. :biggrin:

I'm finishing up my extended essay in art and I was wondering if you guys could offer some help.

You see, my topic is: What has influenced and the influences of Dali's Paranoiac Critical Method.

I was just wondering if anyone could give any suggestions as to fixing the language of that a bit. It's too cluttered.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks in advance!

Reply 1

Osmosis

Howdy. I'm new around here too! I'll try to give you a hand if I can.

What exactly do you want to say? Are the phrases 'what has influenced' and 'the influences' not saying the same thing?

Or did you mean something along the lines of 'what has influenced' and 'what has been influenced by'?

Or am I just being stoopid? (entirely possible :biggrin:

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Reply 2

andy_cole2

what has influenced = what created it as it is
and how has it effected other stuff....there doesn't seem to be much of a question or argument here you seem to just be describing something. anyway i think...nope i give up i believe its a little open ended myself :s

Reply 3

INVISIBLETREES

Sorry. Haha. See, the languge of my topic is so weird.

Yes, I mean what "what has influenced" and "what has been influenced by" the paranoiac-critical method.

I just don't know how to make it sound more coherent.